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You can only choose where you're going in life. Don't sob when somebody passes on, think about the memories and good times you had together. Aunts and grandpas can die. My aunt died on April 19, 2012 My grandpa in 1995. When my mom held the phone up to my aunt's ear, my aunt spoke her last words to my other aunts. But now my aunt is happy with her dad. And I will be happy when I die because i'll be with them too. I love you Aunt Mary and Grandpa B!
Life is a time where we go and have fun not sit and sit in the hot, dry sun. Life is a time to go on adventures on high mountains, on jungles, or on high skyscrapers. Life is a time where we go and have fun not sit and sit in the hot, dry sun.
I don't know what to do today, I don't know what to say in class, I don't know what to play at the park, I sure hope I don't meet a shark. I don't know what to mark on the test, I don't like lemon zest, I hope I don't confess, I don't like to play chess. Hey I know what to do today! I'll just write a poem like this!
My name is Randy, And I like candy, Its very sweet, And once I named my favorite candy Pete, It was the candy skittles, And we like to solve riddles, But then it really turned into a real friend! But that wasn't the end, But what it did, it was as a horrifying thing! It gave me a ring, I said, I'm a boy, I don't marry you! But it said something else.......it's real name was Sue, So This whole tome I thought it it was a boy? And now playing with my special toy! I couldn't take it so I kicked her out and gave the toy to her, And I knew that would occur, And so that was the end of the story, Since that girl was named sue, I wanted to change my name into Lorrie.
Today my name is Emily and I like to go to Yosemite. Yesterday my name was Susie and believe me, I am NOT goofy. Tomorrow my name will be Lucy and only then will I like sushi.
I love my vacations in Summer, But leaving my teacher and friends is a bummer. I know what i'll do! I'll do school in the summer! I don't know which one is funner.
I meant to write "funner" because it rhymes with "Summer". :-)
The wind howling, The trees swaying, A lightning bolt strikes the ground, The thunder snakes through the air. The party begins, Elves singing loudly, Goblins trampling mice. Wizards chanting spells. The extravaganza begins, People roasting chicken, Hobits hiding in the caves, The leprechauns searching for gold. Your journey begins
Hello Reese! You just made my day! I love hearing from you. I hope your summer has been blissful. Have you been playing soccer? I have spent most of my summer at home tending to Parker and now Brooke. They both came down with pneumonia...yikes! We have actually been playing lots of games and simply enjoying the down time. Hopefully once everyone recovers, I'll run into you around town! I can't wait to hear all about your vacation. I miss you!
HELLO MRS. YATES!!!!!!!!! I am so happy I can see you at lunch! I'd be really sad if I couldn't see you. How was your summer? I heard that Parker and Brooke came down with pneumonia... definitely yikes!! I LOVE MRS. YATES CLASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If you were only one inch tall I would be a ant And live in the crack of the groud With a mouse chasing me around I would hide behind a plant That was in the groud And I would not make a soud If you were one inch tall
I am Ashton Rosenzweig I run Rosenzweig‘s ICE CREAM STORE, there are flavors in my freezer you have never seen before, five divine creations too delicious to resist, why not do yourself a favor, try the flavors on my list:
Sour Hard Rocky Road
Frosty Cookie Oreo
Lava Tooth Burner
Nuts and Cream
Sticky Goo
I am Ashton Rosenzweig, I run Rosenzweig's ICE CREAM STORE, taste a flavor from my freezer, you will surely ask for more.
In my humble opinion, to be a teacher is one of the single most rewarding profession. The look on a child's face in the moment of discovery or that special glimpse of inspiration are ones that fill the heart and soul. My name is Carolynn Yates and I teach at a school where kids come first. The team of professionals with whom I work, are indeed some of the most dedicated men and women I know. I have had the honor of teaching 1st grade, fourth grade, and am currently teaching second grade. I want to extend a HUGE thank to all of the talented and giving teachers in blog world who have contributed self-created resources for all to share with the idea that it is for enhancing the learning experience of all children. THANK YOU! As I grow in the field of blogging, I too hope to pay it forward by sharing my resources. Happy blogging and teaching!!!!
Ocean
ReplyDeleteBy: Ara
Such a beautiful sight
Wet, moving, hydrating
Flows in the sun
Moving like dancing person
Water
Wow, what a wonderful poem!! I can visualize it!
DeleteME TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteThe Mill
ReplyDeleteThere once was an old, crooked mill
That sat upon Blueberry hill
It gave me a a fright
At the horrible sight
So i ate a big pot of dill.
Thank You :-)
Great poem, Sophie!
DeleteDidn't you make that one up at school? :-)
Yes?
DeleteYeah that was great!
ReplyDeleteAWESOME!
ReplyDeleteThank You! Sam
DeleteThere once was a very dark land,
ReplyDeleteThat was already covered in sand,
Despite my fright,
It wasn't that bright,
You'd probably think Id' be banned!
Nice poem, Sam!
DeleteDid you make that one up at school too? ;-)
Yeah, I did.
DeleteWill you tell me what dill is? Please?
ReplyDeleteSam,
DeleteDill is a brand of pickle. ( I think.)
My mom and dad eat dill pickle ALL the time.
DeleteDill is a seasoning.(You could call it a pepper.) It is usually put in pickle jars to pickle them.
DeleteI THINK?!
DeleteOK, my mom told me dill is an herb.
DeleteYou can only choose where you're going in life.
ReplyDeleteDon't sob when somebody passes on,
think about the memories and good times you had together.
Aunts and grandpas can die.
My aunt died on April 19, 2012
My grandpa in 1995.
When my mom held the phone up to my aunt's ear, my aunt spoke her last words to my other aunts.
But now my aunt is happy with her dad.
And I will be happy when I die because i'll be with them too.
I love you Aunt Mary and Grandpa B!
Sorry,
ReplyDeleteMy last poem was kind of sad.
That's ok. I think it was touching.
Deletebutterflies
ReplyDeletecute , colorful
flying , polining , swarming
like to go on flowers and fly in the wind.
colorful
By: Becky
ReplyDeletebutterflies
cute , colorful
flying polining, swarming
like flowers and like to fly in the wind
cerious
Life is a time
ReplyDeletewhere we go and have fun
not sit and sit in the hot, dry sun.
Life is a time
to go on adventures
on high mountains, on jungles, or on high skyscrapers.
Life is a time
where we go and have fun
not sit and sit in the hot, dry sun.
I think that you did a wonderful job on this poem, Zoe.
DeleteAnd your life should be filled with all those things.
:-)
Where is that place?
ReplyDeleteThe wind was blowing outside the bay.
Together in a warm place,
By the clouds is the sunset,
I saw a lovely place.
It was home!
Home is a lovely place, Bella P! Your poem is awesome!
DeleteI Don't Know What to do Today
ReplyDeleteI don't know what to do today,
I don't know what to say in class,
I don't know what to play at the park,
I sure hope I don't meet a shark.
I don't know what to mark on the test,
I don't like lemon zest,
I hope I don't confess,
I don't like to play chess.
Hey I know what to do today!
I'll just write a poem like this!
Nice poem but today is almost over
DeleteFamily Big,Responsel Loving,Caring,Moving Always watching out for others in the family Honstey
ReplyDeleteReese, I suggest that u should write the rest of the sentences on the bottom so it looks like a real poem
DeleteMishievious
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Silly
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Yes
Adjective
Turm
Eagles
Roshan 20
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Wow Julia that was a fantasic poem!I lovwd it and Nathan i agree with u.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Randy,
ReplyDeleteAnd I like candy,
Its very sweet,
And once I named my favorite candy Pete,
It was the candy skittles,
And we like to solve riddles,
But then it really turned into a real friend!
But that wasn't the end,
But what it did, it was as a horrifying thing!
It gave me a ring,
I said, I'm a boy, I don't marry you!
But it said something else.......it's real name was Sue,
So This whole tome I thought it it was a boy?
And now playing with my special toy!
I couldn't take it so I kicked her out and gave the toy to her,
And I knew that would occur,
And so that was the end of the story,
Since that girl was named sue, I wanted to change my name into Lorrie.
Happiness
ReplyDeleteOutstanding
Mine
Entertaining
Sophie, your sweet poem is full of depth! I love it!
ReplyDeleteWhat wicked witch wacked watermelons
ReplyDeletewith Walter the whale
while watering a white wagon
from Witch Wamaile.
There once was a young girl named Jill
ReplyDeleteShe went up a hill to get Phil
They popped a balloon
And sang a great tune
And was paid with a one dollar bill.
There once was a fellow named Max
ReplyDeleteWho made an axe to relax
He ate a pill
That made him ill
Then he blurted out baseball facts.
There once was a fellow named Mike
ReplyDeleteAt work, he went on strike
He slipped on the floor
That made him sore
And thats how Mike went on strike.
Loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ,!!!!!!!!!a,!!!,!!,,!!,!,!!,,!!,!,,!,!,Roshan
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VIctory
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Roshan 20
Hey Ara nice rymes
ReplyDeleteTiung twisters nathaN
ReplyDeleteCan sombody send me a note
ReplyDeleteYes!
DeletePlease
ReplyDeleteFrom Roshan and the one up top
DeletePlease
ReplyDeletenice peaom Becky Roshan
ReplyDeleteToday my name is Emily
ReplyDeleteand I like to go to Yosemite.
Yesterday my name was Susie
and believe me, I am NOT goofy.
Tomorrow my name will be Lucy
and only then will I like sushi.
Powerful wizard
ReplyDeleteA lightning scar tells his life
The brave wizard lurks.
Can you guess who it is? :-)
Is it maby.......................Harry Potter
DeleteDing ding!! Correct!!
Delete:-)
H arry Potter
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G reen house
W ater
A nd fun
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S oft cat
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DeleteH arry Potter
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G reen house
W ater
A nd fun
R on
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S oft cat
I loved your poem! I like Harry Potter too!
DeleteI know a bright teacher,
ReplyDeleteA smart and bright teacher,
A smart and bright teacher,
With a brain that fills up other brains.
And a mouth that shares out descriptive words,
A heart that is compassionate,
A voice that uses fluency,
And Feet that walk proudly.
I know a Bright teacher.
A smart and bright teacher,
A smart and bright teacher,
Who I will have in my heart forever.
I know which teacher it is...
DeleteMRS. YATES!!!!!!!
Ara dischisptie words Roshan
ReplyDeleteFluffy, chirping ball.
ReplyDeleteA fluffy chirping fuzzball.
Can't resist them!
Summer Vacation
ReplyDeleteI love my vacations in Summer,
But leaving my teacher and friends is a bummer.
I know what i'll do!
I'll do school in the summer!
I don't know which one is funner.
I meant to write "funner" because it rhymes with "Summer". :-)
The wind howling,
ReplyDeleteThe trees swaying,
A lightning bolt strikes the ground,
The thunder snakes through the air.
The party begins,
Elves singing loudly,
Goblins trampling mice.
Wizards chanting spells.
The extravaganza begins,
People roasting chicken,
Hobits hiding in the caves,
The leprechauns searching for gold.
Your journey begins
Great description Julia!
DeleteYou are a beautiful poet.
I love that Julia i felt i was in it.
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs.Yates I know that summer is almost over but I wanted to talk to you. How is your summer?Anwser me please.
ReplyDeleteHello Reese! You just made my day! I love hearing from you. I hope your summer has been blissful. Have you been playing soccer? I have spent most of my summer at home tending to Parker and now Brooke. They both came down with pneumonia...yikes! We have actually been playing lots of games and simply enjoying the down time. Hopefully once everyone recovers, I'll run into you around town! I can't wait to hear all about your vacation. I miss you!
ReplyDeleteHELLO MRS. YATES!!!!!!!!! I am so happy I can see you at lunch! I'd be really sad if I couldn't see you.
ReplyDeleteHow was your summer? I heard that Parker and Brooke came down with pneumonia... definitely yikes!! I LOVE MRS. YATES CLASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poetry allows you to feel!
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DeleteATV
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FROM UNDER THE
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RACERS
I like it. It's cool
DeleteIf you were only one inch tall
ReplyDeleteI would be a ant
And live in the crack of the groud
With a mouse chasing me around
I would hide behind a plant
That was in the groud
And I would not make a soud
If you were one inch tall
We feel inspired to write my poem after reading yours! It was fantastic! Thank goodness we're not one inch tall!
DeleteI am Ashton Rosenzweig
ReplyDeleteI run Rosenzweig‘s ICE CREAM STORE,
there are flavors in my freezer
you have never seen before,
five divine creations
too delicious to resist,
why not do yourself a favor,
try the flavors on my list:
Sour Hard Rocky Road
Frosty Cookie Oreo
Lava Tooth Burner
Nuts and Cream
Sticky Goo
I am Ashton Rosenzweig,
I run Rosenzweig's ICE CREAM STORE,
taste a flavor from my freezer,
you will surely ask for more.
I came across a shark
ReplyDeleteOn the way to school
His fin was very sharp
And his teeth was very nasty
I hid him in my locker
So that teacher would not see
He stayed there very quietly
Until frightened by a baby